I absolutely love this story! Its veri interesting! Please update soon! =D

WOW! OMG!! I love this story!
I really like the plot too, it's definately interesting. And I really like how you have so many characters and they're all related to each other through some kind of relationaships. Yes, I do just love Lundie, he's awsome! LOL, love the Mandora's Lock joke, it's almost deep. Anyways, I'm really interested and can't wait to read more.
O My Gosh, I can't wait for when Lorne grows up fully.
Ep, I just can't wait altogether!!
Please, please update when you have time!!

I'm hooked on this story after four poor lonely chapters
please update I'd really like to see where this goes :]

I like this and really, really, really hope you'll update one day. I'll be looking forward to it.

This story is rather fascinating,I hope you update soon.

Hi, Just wanted to drop a note to say this story is very interesting and I am eager to see how you take it. I hope Silas finds his place in his travels.

VT

Great story! I love it! I know that you are occupied with other things, life and your other story but, please, don't forget this one because it's great!

How can we not like Lundie? He's utterly creepy, but still sweet.

I feel sad for Nerini now. At least Silas still has Simon *whoisobviouslyintohim* for companionship.

Livi

i like.
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May i...may i...have some more please?

i'm awfully hungry sir Mädchen.
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~Human

well, Lundie is like--the poor poor inferiority-complexed person who cares greatly for a person's whose love he knows is going to end up not for him...so I guess it makes me feel terrible for him and so he becomes a favorite. I do love him so.

Byt Lorne needs to realise that he wants to sleep with Silas, whose kohl I might add, it kinky. xD...or not, but it's extremely sexy sounding.

This has totally caught my interest and I just can't wait until maybe Lorne makes Silas his bride. x3 what a punishment. Yes! Lorne should have just made that the punishment...

Well, anyways, update soon!

beautiful! Your Lundie is such an intriguing character, as are most of your boys... I love the Seasons concept too- keep going!

Please update this story! Please!

Heartbreakingly INTRIGUING! Brilliant writing! Update soon please!

Well just finished reading your story, Unrelated Royalty. It is off to a smashing start. Keep it up! Oh yes I did check out the pics of the Demons of the Heart's characters on your deviant art account. What you have up so far anyways. I must say all the pics are well done! My favorite though, for right now is Zero. He looks like a model and has an almost predatory air about himself. OH ya I also like Bryce. He looks like that tough mysterious guy that all the good girls fall for. Keep up the good work on your stories and your pictures!

This is nice. =) I like how the story being laid out neatly like this, how the tension & grudge & hidden desire were built up. It has a feeling like, a set of movie frames slowly rolling, you know?

Btw, wasn't Nerini supposed to be sixteen now? She was younger than Silas by 4 years, wasn't she? And you seem to confuse between the word "than" and "then." Like, instead of "I will go then," you wrote "I will go than."

Hm, personally, I don't like Silas. He seems too weak, not only physically but also mentally. I guess spending your life doing nothing useful because no one thinks you're useful would do that to you, but still... He's kinda vain too? Why is he bringing the kohl with him? Anyway, I hope he'd get stronger in the future.

Update soon, 'k? ^__^