|Reviews for Unrelated Royalty|
| Would not Could not in a Box 5/26/08 . chapter 4
beautiful! Your Lundie is such an intriguing character, as are most of your boys... I love the Seasons concept too- keep going!
| erqerqr 5/20/08 . chapter 1
Please update this story! Please!
| silverdragon4736 5/10/08 . chapter 4
Heartbreakingly INTRIGUING! Brilliant writing! Update soon please!
| Tiffany Lindley 4/11/08 . chapter 4
Well just finished reading your story, Unrelated Royalty. It is off to a smashing start. Keep it up! Oh yes I did check out the pics of the Demons of the Heart's characters on your deviant art account. What you have up so far anyways. I must say all the pics are well done! My favorite though, for right now is Zero. He looks like a model and has an almost predatory air about himself. OH ya I also like Bryce. He looks like that tough mysterious guy that all the good girls fall for. Keep up the good work on your stories and your pictures!
| Shiyuri 4/1/08 . chapter 4
This is nice. ) I like how the story being laid out neatly like this, how the tension & grudge & hidden desire were built up. It has a feeling like, a set of movie frames slowly rolling, you know?
Btw, wasn't Nerini supposed to be sixteen now? She was younger than Silas by 4 years, wasn't she? And you seem to confuse between the word "than" and "then." Like, instead of "I will go then," you wrote "I will go than."
Hm, personally, I don't like Silas. He seems too weak, not only physically but also mentally. I guess spending your life doing nothing useful because no one thinks you're useful would do that to you, but still... He's kinda vain too? Why is he bringing the kohl with him? Anyway, I hope he'd get stronger in the future.
Update soon, 'k? _
| Midnights Scream 3/30/08 . chapter 4
Lundie's okay, but I have no real love for him, but it's too early in the story really for me to grow especially fond of the characters.:) It's good!
| Midnights Scream 3/30/08 . chapter 1
ah. I love your writing it's so good. I love your plot and it's cute too. Don't forget about your other story though!lol. :) love it
| Esquirella 3/14/08 . chapter 4
This is another wonderful story from you! I can hardly wait for an update!
| ToraYashaChan 3/7/08 . chapter 4
Well...I must say that I like how this chapter turned out. But I'm a little confused...why would Silas have left the palace to that country he's going to five years after it was decided he would be sent off to go? That was the only confusing part for me xD _ so...yeah...I would suggest having the whole "Silas leaving the castle" decision in chapter 3 could be moved to chapter 4 instead...it would make more sense that way, I think...
| jess 2/23/08 . chapter 4
ew lundie is sick and so is the king, haha lorne is short that's what he gets, and I hope silas ends up with simon. it's an okay story
| shellbell10 2/23/08 . chapter 1
i love it
its soo good
| ya 2/18/08 . chapter 4
Question:How is Silas pronounced?
| narcissistic 2/17/08 . chapter 4
so it's going to be a time skip again?
| Rubadub 2/17/08 . chapter 4
Man, I wish Lundie wouldn't have to restrain himself so much D:
I think it'd be hot if he and Silas got it on -waggles eyebrows-
I love Simon too. He's such a sweetheart when he says that home is wherever Silas is. It made me go 'Aw.'
And then I started to wonder a bit about those two getting it on during their quest thing... heh.
Maybe I should stop talking now eh?
Lovely chapter as always,
| gummybaby 2/17/08 . chapter 4
I got the lock joke, very clever... and I know what you mean about Lundie, but he's just so human, it's hard to hate him. I don't think he's actually evil, just sick. Isn't it funny when side characters take over you story...it's happened to me too.