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Reviews For: The Beauty That's Wasted

daughterofmusic
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abuseI really liked the perspective you put on this. "Yet few stop to notice in their haste / What's right outside" - so true.
Keep it up!
~Daughter of Music
Lurid Black
2008-01-10
ch 1,
abuseThats sweet, shows an intresting, clear point, love it, don't stop writing!
~Lurid~
VegasGoddess
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful! Absolutely beautiful! Excellent job with recognizing the fact the we DO live in a material world, and how we're destryoing the beauty around us by not taking the time to enjoy it.

I just think this is incredible!

♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥
simpleplan13
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseI love this piece because its so true and you described it wonderfully... awesome job
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