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| daughterofmusic 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the perspective you put on this. "Yet few stop to notice in their haste / What's right outside" - so true. Keep it up! ~Daughter of Music |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseThats sweet, shows an intresting, clear point, love it, don't stop writing! ~Lurid~ |
| VegasGoddess 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! Absolutely beautiful! Excellent job with recognizing the fact the we DO live in a material world, and how we're destryoing the beauty around us by not taking the time to enjoy it. I just think this is incredible! ♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥ |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseI love this piece because its so true and you described it wonderfully... awesome job |