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| Something Corporate 2008-03-29 ch 1,  | abuseI like this..It's real, and I love that.. |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sweet... ~Daughter of Music |
| something i can never have 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abusethis poem... is beautiful. simply written, perfectly phrased, not overstated... it speaks of longing and pain so effortlessly. Thank you for sharing it |
| Winged Kitty 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseAww.. That was so sweet. I loved the repetition of "I'm missing you." This poem is absolutely awesome. Gotta love it. And it's really nicely done. Very sweet, very beautiful, very sad. This really captures me, especially since there'll always be people that we really miss. Any person that has moved or lost a loved one will understand how painful it is and how much you miss them. And anyone who doesn't would most likely understand simply through reading this. I love it. Really powerful. Winged Kitty. Still love your poetry. Going well. Keep it up! Love yaa! ^_^ |
| Channie-Paige 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. Simply beautiful, this poem is awesome and sad. I love it though...I can relate this hits close to home for me. |
| right2reality 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseI really like the repetition in this poem- especially at the end- it's a great ending. You really show vivid emotion. Beautiful. Sad, but beautiful :D -right2reality |
| VegasGoddess 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseThis makes me want to cry! It's so beautifully written, when you lose someone special, this is what we all feel, what we all wish we could say... You captured the emotions perfectly, I think. Good job. Excellent, excellent work, as always! All my love, ♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥ |
| -insertsomethinguniquehere- 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseI like the repetition of "I'm missing you" in this. And it has a really good ending. Great poem! |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThe repetition is really great and the rest of it is sad and beautiful |
| Michael Kim 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abusea universal theme personally developed: i can't criticize this for its heartfulness sorry for your loss - in whatever form it came PS: grammar police says change "you're" to "your" in the second last line |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseGood poem, 'Gone forever But in my heart, you’re memory will stay I’ll always miss you' great way to end it. Keep it Up! |