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| HGiel 2008-01-04 ch 1,  | abuseThis was very sweet, you did a great job |
| Lynn's Love 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseLame, no. But it's kind of cheesy in a good way. I like it. Unlike some people on Fictionpress, you can spell and use good grammar. That you have to be proud of. |
| Pointy Objects 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, great summary. It definitely drew me in right away, and I loved it. Second, you opened the story with my favorite lyric of my favorite song, by my favorite Canadian singer! I swear on everything I own, that I will one day be Mrs. Micheal Buble. Either way, I love that song, and it completely applied to the story. And what an endearing story it was! Very sweet, great length, and not too sentimental. Great job, can't wait to see more of your work! |
| Queen of Crows 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseVery cute |