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Crazy Dude, II
2008-04-24
ch 30,
abuseI absolutly love this story! It's a wonderful read!
Toadster
2008-03-29
ch 2,
abuse"But the joy is quickly followed by a momentary pang of sadness as I realize I’m the only one who admires my work. It’s hard when you know you have talent, that if given the chance you’ll meet with success. It only takes that one opportunity to change a life."

I think everyone can relate to that here.
PrincessNancy
2008-03-16
ch 30,
abuseAww..

I went aww reading the story. lol I SOO wanna be a writer. Hehe. Maybe I have OCD. I don't know.

lol the story is GREAT! AWESOME!..

I'm glad Erika ended up with Elliot! :D

XoXo

NAN!
AutumnMorning
2008-03-14
ch 30,
abuseI just adore this story! It's wonderfully written and I've fallen in complete love with your characters. Thank you so much for posting it here and giving me the opportunity to read it!
a1guitarist
2008-03-03
ch 30,
abuseI really enjoyed your story. The character had a very quirky, interesting personality. Please let me know when your sequel comes out in ebook form.
Alien*Vision
2008-03-02
ch 30,
abuseWhat a wonderful story! I loved Erika, Elliot, the plot, the vivid settings, and especially the excerpts from Erika's romance novels. This story was absolutely positively hilarious. I read this all in one go, and am amazed by your brilliance :P

I think that's enough of the compliments ^__^ Constructive criticism? Write a new summary. This is a delightful story and far better than some of the pre-teen 'romance' writer's stuff ("Like, omg, he was the school's hottie, and like, I'm such a goth-queen and outsider. Everyone hates me and, like, my twin sister is an evil ** dating said hottie."). The summary was confusing (you've seen the ebook or not) and stilting. And summaries is the advertising-selling point of the story. With more readers, you may actually get some more constructive criticism and some more suggestions. I'm afraid I'm not too good at both of those points :P I'm only good at blubbering with happiness and outrageously complimenting authors who entertained me for a few hours of my day.

Post some more of your stories! I'd love to see what else you've written. Write on!
Scarlette Jane Catherine
2008-03-02
ch 30,
abuseThis was a great story with real, lovable characters. I enjoyed it immensely. Can't wait to read your next one.
SavRm4MiLuv
2008-03-01
ch 30,
abusecute last line!!

can't believe this is over :( aw *sheds tear*.. but to know that erika is happy and germy makes the ending bittersweet. lol! Now when you say avail on Ebook.. what does that mean? Is it free? lol! I'm interested in reading more of your work, so just let me know when you've got things coming out :)

whatta great fic. Luved it!
FireFallon
2008-03-01
ch 30,
abusewell duh i want to know when the next one is coming out! :) But you're going on my author alert list so i'll already know :)I miss the story already, i've been obsessively checking my email for this last chapter! :)
Somewhere InBetween Hi and ...
2008-03-01
ch 30,
abuseplease tell me! that would be so cool...i like elliot by the way...so awesome...^.^

Cappy-Tan Burger
SavRm4MiLuv
2008-03-01
ch 29,
abusesorry! i've been out of town! But I'm so glad that I had a bunch of chapters to catch up on. This story is brilliant! I don't see any room for improvement.. I like how she's taking medication and not miraculously getting over her ocd, just cus she's a mary-sue. You pay attention to detail so well, like making sure the flowers Elliot gave her were taken care of, and placed in a vase.

Speaking of Elliot... I guess I got my fill of him ;)

It was about time he shut her up and told her how he felt. aww he liked her the moment he saw her! aw! squeals! The only thing is I would've liked to know more of her thought process before giving Elliot the greenlight for sex. Because she was so uptight before, ya know? And I know in the heat of the moment, she probably was ready and willing, but it wasn't really put across on paper. It seemed more like, "Elliot offered, so I accepted" u know? It wasn't bad, but it was something I had to blink and re-read because I totally didn't expect it.

The dad's hospitalization was so real, and not just a filler or plot mover.

Diane is an awesome character, I love how she became all teenager-like in the end.

Maricela is a great villian.

That first kiss was great.

Ugh. This story is perfect.

I'm ** it's almost over :(
FireFallon
2008-02-26
ch 27,
abuseIts about damn time! :) Finally Elliot put his big boy pants on and took control. Yay! :)
Written
2008-02-25
ch 27,
abuseit's very funny, and I definitely feel for the characters :) well done!
Somewhere InBetween Hi and ...
2008-02-25
ch 27,
abuseaw! yes! finally! yay! they kiss! they kiss!
FireFallon
2008-02-24
ch 26,
abuseDid you realize that Evie is one letter away from evil which is exactly what you are for leaving us hanging like that! *GASP* You better update today, because the suspense just might kill me and then you'll have to live with being a murderer :)
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