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| Jestry 2008-08-08 ch 1,  | abuseOh man; the beginning made me kind of sad. But I'm glad everyone turned out to be okay, and happy, and it all worked out. (: |
| Evenstar1389 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuselol you had me going for a moment there, i really believed that he meant the kiss for Priscilla. But how do you explain the beginning where Maurice was surprised and ended up half a meter away from her? =S It sounds like you changed paths halfway through the story.. |
| GrannyP 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseThis story was great! I was captivated the whole time, and I couldn't look away from my screen! Very very cute! |
| Elevator Passenger 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThis writing was very sweet and easy to read. The plot was quite predictable, but I liked that you put the twist right at the beggining. Things seem believeable enough, but a tad rushed with Maurice realizing he actually likes Let as well. Keep writing. |
| nat van os 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was way cute! I want to know more about Priscilla! |
| leslienicolespeaks 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abusethis one is way cute. i like how he finds himself interested in her after the accidental kiss. |
| outsidersgirl 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abusea good one |