Well, you managed to do the impossible...you managed to send a single chill down my spine. Kudos!

Great job with descriptions and the equally gruesome actions! Even though this was written, what, nine months ago? Don't EVER forget about your older stuff, even if you look back on them and think they're all crap (which I have done before).

Kudos to you for coming up with such an original story! Keep up the good work!

Gross. Good, but EW. GURO. HACK HACK. I think I'll just stick with psychological thrillers from now on.

WOW, That was one of the best Horror stories I have ever read!Great story!

Awesome, disturbing story! Mona was a great character, the accent just gave her a lot more character. She seemed really crazy and disturbed, but alkso very cool about what she was doing. Awesome job, you're a great writer!

Ew. That made me squirm. But it was really good.

E! Thanks for giving me nightmares ;) Nicely written. I didn't expect the cannibalism thingy. CREEPY!

Ooh, absolutely adored it! Beautifully written, I must say. It made me smile, as creepy and demented as that sounds. It probably would've been better if you didn't kill Sara so quickly. Maybe Mona could've dragged it out a bit longer? Anyway, it was a great read. Added to Favorites.

whoa, this was disturbin... i love!

Wow. That was disturbing in the best sort of way. Keep it up, I'd love to read more of your stuff.