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| spring robins 2008-02-29 ch 1,  | abusei heart it! i think its a little odd that she went over to his house when he cut himself even though she hated him, but that's just my view. |
| GrannyP 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseYay! I love clumsiness! I also love how the people say "freaking" a lot. I tend to do that and people think I am insane, so I enjoy seeing others do it as well, even if they are fictional (or "fictional") people in a story. Another very cute piece of work! |
| x3life 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseaw that was really cute!! =) enjoyed reading it |
| chinkybaby18 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseeffin sweet! |
| floopfloop 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseit was cute but the last bit was a little vague. in the end, tator should hav said "i love you too" or sumthing to return his feelings for her but it doesnt say how she felt so we dont know wat she did. so i think the ending could be a bit better. other than that it was great!! |
| Saphimire Karishnikova 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseI like it... but... Constructive criticism: The ending seems too fast. Too rushed. I think the story would be better if Taylor didn't give in all that easily, or the story drew out their characters a little, and give a little background information. *shrug* If you don't want it, just ignore it. I like the story the way it is, but I just think it could be improved a little. ^_^ Keep writing though! I really like your style. =D |
| Pinkamoo 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseNice, but let me borrow him, I'd love to fix his hand and get showered with kisses. I mean, I do it for my brother often enough, though his kisses aren't really desired. Cute story. |
| KittyKaiya 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting, I like the feel of this chapter. It set the stage for you to develope it into something more if you wanted. I enjoyed reading it, nice work. |
| Lily Llynn 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseAw, cute. It does happen very suddenly, though. A bit too fast-paced for my liking (but I still like this). (: It's well-written, and I like the insertion of Tiffany - hilarious! An awesome addition from artistic dreamer to our c2. (: |
| NoieD 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseVery cute; could we get a follow-up? Thanks for posting. |
| Sanou Izumi 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseVery simple haha nice! Good work! |