Oh-that's was pretty, I liked it :D

~~Cross Rose

I was so happy that you've put up more poems. I look forward to reading your work. You said you haven't written in a while but honestly no one could even tell. You continue to write so well. You are such a great writer and I really like how you broaden your horizons with new ideas. Your comparsions are always so unique and interesting. Good job! Looking forward to updates.

a sweet poem :]
good use of repetition also
keep writing :]