Heh, marionette is one of my favorite words. Being abandoned is one of the worst feelings in the world. Awesome poem, I love it!

great job. ncie story. sad.

very visual! I can see you hanging like a puppet! it is so descriptive that i got the picture in my head within the first two lines! This is really good!

"I’m nothing…
No longer even a puppet…
You’re an accursed silhouette
But I’m less…
Like an odious ragdoll
Thrown away and left to die
Manipulated and cast aside…"

I can empathize with this. I am absolutely in love with this poem. You are an amazing poet! I hope to read more from you as well :)

I like this a lot. The word choice you've used works perfectly for this piece-very powerful and intense. The mood fits in really well with the topic, and the imagery is very clear. Great job. Well done.

I really like thie one..nice use of metaphor. You have nice word choice. Good work!

The word choice in this creates specific visuals. I like how this has both focus and emotion. Very well constructed.

Once again, wow! You're very talented! This was great- loved the description. But is it fiction or nonfiction? Just curious- you don't have to answer. Hope it's fiction.
--K. Z.

Wow. I don't even know what to say. That was incredible. I can almost picture it in my mind. Very nice job.

Powerful choice of words. Makes you think... I like ^.^ Keep up the good writing!