Interesting story =) I suspected the guy lived in the house, with his cake being inside the fridge..

This was amazing..so funny and ironic. I especially liked the ending, and the x next to the number. Very nicely done. :)

Meg Zettley, awesome.

No, really. This is a great story. The 'X' at the end was very cute. And I like Harvey. xD Favorited.

haha great on-shot!
xx

Fantastic story, I love your style of writing :)

Oh I loved this and wish that you'd write more one-shots... you're quite good at them!

Hi, I'm from the review marathon (link is on my profile)

I thought the dialogue in this was fab- you have a really good grasp on humour, and there were even elements of well excecuted comedic timing which was interesting to read.

I think I've been to a lot of parties like the one you described so I could relate a lot to your characters. I was a little confused by the end, however, and think that you sometimes continued scenes past where they had to, making the story longer than it possibly should have been- don't be afraid to edit mercilessly at some points.

Good job!

cute! :D

Aww, that was cute!
Loved it!
-Aria

First off, I'd have to say I've never heard "Ex" as a last name before. It's a bit odd. Other than that, though, this was a very intriguing and pretty well-written oneshot. (: I liked it! Which is why I'm going to go add it to my c2 now. (:

You sure like cake, don't you? Two of your stories involved cake. But good job, my girl. Very cute :)

Oh that was awesome, I love the cake thing. I think you should've gone into more depth with that, it was pretty darn funny. I feel like this story is calling for another chapter! Maybe how Meg and Weston get together (obviously the mobile number, but with more detail!). Great job! Keep writing, you are very talented.

a knitted black cap that covered the chocolate mess of hair he called 'manageable'.

I called it barely.

HA!
"No problem," he laughed, "you looked like you had it all under control, anyway, what with the '**'s and 'oh **'s and, my favourite, 'timber'."
AHAHAHAH. I love that. I wish soemone falls at school tomorrow.
naval-melting; thats a hoot.
Awh, I really loved this.
You're an INSANE writer.
I love it.
:]

Oh man, so amazing lol. And humorous. And I was definitely not expecting Weston to be an Ex--just some crazy, hot dude lol.

Loved it :D

~Mia

aww this was cute but kinda confused about the ending... he writes his phone number on her hand... and how ppl like write their name he wrote a "X" ?