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| I Murder on Impulse 2008-06-02 ch 1,  | abusehaha great on-shot! xx |
| d666lisa 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseFantastic story, I love your style of writing :) |
| TheArtOfBeingMe 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseOh I loved this and wish that you'd write more one-shots... you're quite good at them! |
| KnittingKneedle 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseHi, I'm from the review marathon (link is on my profile) I thought the dialogue in this was fab- you have a really good grasp on humour, and there were even elements of well excecuted comedic timing which was interesting to read. I think I've been to a lot of parties like the one you described so I could relate a lot to your characters. I was a little confused by the end, however, and think that you sometimes continued scenes past where they had to, making the story longer than it possibly should have been- don't be afraid to edit mercilessly at some points. Good job! |
| katie valentine 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abusecute! :D |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was cute! Loved it! -Aria |
| Lily Llynn 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, I'd have to say I've never heard "Ex" as a last name before. It's a bit odd. Other than that, though, this was a very intriguing and pretty well-written oneshot. (: I liked it! Which is why I'm going to go add it to my c2 now. (: |
| Pinkamoo 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseYou sure like cake, don't you? Two of your stories involved cake. But good job, my girl. Very cute :) |
| wandless 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseOh that was awesome, I love the cake thing. I think you should've gone into more depth with that, it was pretty darn funny. I feel like this story is calling for another chapter! Maybe how Meg and Weston get together (obviously the mobile number, but with more detail!). Great job! Keep writing, you are very talented. |
| katieee 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abusea knitted black cap that covered the chocolate mess of hair he called 'manageable'. I called it barely. HA! "No problem," he laughed, "you looked like you had it all under control, anyway, what with the '**'s and 'oh **'s and, my favourite, 'timber'." AHAHAHAH. I love that. I wish soemone falls at school tomorrow. naval-melting; thats a hoot. Awh, I really loved this. You're an INSANE writer. I love it. :] |
| mia5081 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseOh man, so amazing lol. And humorous. And I was definitely not expecting Weston to be an Ex--just some crazy, hot dude lol. Loved it :D ~Mia |
| x3life 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseaww this was cute but kinda confused about the ending... he writes his phone number on her hand... and how ppl like write their name he wrote a "X" ? |
| Lovedward48 2008-01-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseYeah! I love it! Meg and Weston are cute!^^ |
| cls81690 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseHaha, I like this. Meg seems so funny and real--quite a feat for a short story! I'm glad you posted this. |
| Boo 2008-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abusereally nice New Year story=)) |