I'm head-over-heals for your story, it was just what I was searching for XD Pity, it's not finished T^T

I am a new reader to this story, but I am liking it so far.

I haven't noticed too many errors, but the ones I have noticed are so minor that I don't remember them well enough to tell you.

Your non-con scene was very well written, to the point that I could follow Adrian's feelings throughout it all. I could even feel his disgust with himself for enjoying the feelings when it was over. You seem to have a good handle on the speed and timing in which to increase his acceptance of sex with Ivane.

This story is flowing very smoothly so far and you seem to be right on track with where the characters should be with their relationship.

I am really enjoying this story and I hope you will update quickly and consistently. Thank you for sharing.

I frickin love it!! omg! I thought it being a gay story and all will make it disturbing and all but my sister said it was really good and I wish they madet this story into a book its just soo...omg! i just love it! :)

Wow! This is very, very good. Shootings, mafia, and boy-boy sex? The sweetest mix I've tasted as yet. Keep it up, my dear, keep it up. You're absolutely on my favorites lists.

Wow . . . that was incredible. You did that splendidly. I love the quiet emptiness that seems to wrap Adrian after the shooting. Fantastic work; thsi has become one of my favorite chapters of all the stories I've read here.

Don't be insecure! FABULOUS non-con. Better than I can write, for sure. Mine is either too gooey to actually count or it's so harsh you can't even read it. Yours was perfect!

You're doing fantastic, I'm not sure whether I love Ivane or not but he's certainly hot. WAY less typos this time, very good job. I'm loving this so far.

Oh, this is going to be good, I can tell. Don't worry about the tense, the only jarring thing is the very rare misspells here and there. Don't worry about it. *smile*

u have SO much talent keep writing !

I really like this, and I hope it hasn't been completely abandoned.

It kind of reminds me of a manga I read awhile ago ... except it was in the past, and the dude he was married to wasn't ... well, a jerk I suppose is the word for it lol.

Anyway, I really like it ^_^

amazing story . i love ivane *tee-hee* he's soo evil . :D update soon?

love your story very interesting cant wait to see what happens to kia please write more

you have to update please b/c you just left me hanging there on that cliff and i don't know how much longer i can hold on ^-^

I love this story... it one of the best i read so far can't wait till you update...please try to updaye ASAP!

I really love this fic. It's very interesting although it seems a bit rushed in the beginning. I would have liked to read more about the actual wedding.

Very good characterization, I like how stubborn Adrian is and the mystery surrounding Ivane.

Hope you update soon. Can't wait to see more sparks fly between Adrian and Ivane. :)