Goddammit. I KNEW you were going to kill Zee. You "do you have this in black?" girls always ** do.

But yeah, I got into it enough to be righteously enraged by it.

Y'know... character death is cheating. ANYONE can make a tear-jerker by killing off a character (or in this case, a character's love-interest). You could kill off a PET and make a tear-jerker. It's not even hard.

As for a review - besides me just ranting about the content - it was very, very, very good - and it would have been FREAKING GREAT if you'd found a way to get them together again instead of taking the easy way out and killing Zee.

Apparently I can't stop myself from falling back into ranting...

So pat yourself on the back - you got to me. It's just that I don't much appreciate how you did it.

So - if you still want a beta, you got one - and I don't make that offer often. Last time, I ended up writing the damn story FOR the person.

And be assured that if you pull ** like THIS again I WILL NOT let you get away with it! Well... I can't stop you, of course, but you'll damn well get an earful about it, anyway.

Jesus man, that made me cry. Seriously. Like, my face is all horrible and sticky now. Embarassing. But it was so good. I cant imagine being in this guys place. Id probably just have a green day and jump off a cliff or somehting melodramatic like that. This is great though, so bittersweet you want to melt it and add soem sugar. Sort of like that 90% dark chocolate **. Yeah. 90% dark chocolate.
Well, I congratulate you on this. S'pretty perfect, and I didnt see anny mistakes at all.
Lovelove.

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THat nearly made me cry.."^" I loved it

Ahh - you bastard! I hatehatehate stories that make me want to cry. And, okay, I love them too. We have a v. complicated love/hate relationship. Sometimes Black Humour joins in and we have a threesome. :P Anyway, this was great. The letters from Jay especially - his character pretty much shouts at you from the ... page? Er. Technical details are technical, and therefore not important. I felt that the letter from Mum Whateverherlastnameis was a bit ... pompous, maybe. I can see that it'd be stiff, 'cos of wanting to distance herself from it all, (or something,) but it feels a bit too purple and ... I dunno, but it doesn't feel as real as the rest of the story. The end was good, only I couldn't concentrate on it properly because it got all blurry. Thanks for the read. :)

You broke my heart-this was so sad. But I loved it soo much!