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Reviews For: Someday
Mimi.Casais 2008-01-04 . chapter 1
I think this is a nice poem with a good feeling to it, it gave me a sensation of peace. The only thing I read and I didn't like so much was the repetition of the word "this" on the tenth and eleventh lines. Keep up the good work :)
Random-Idiocity 2008-01-04 . chapter 1
This is a good poem. 'I believe that there's a hope for the future. If the present is not what I dream of.' That was a good line. Keep it Up!
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