Hey,

This sounds pretty interesting. Actually it kinda reminds me a lot of my own story, which also deals w/ relationships in high school and stuff.

This sounds like a bit o' a cliche plotline-thats really my only crit. I mean, I've read a lot of stories where this sort of relationship dilemma happens, ya know? I'm sure this could still be a fascinating story but just pointing that out, ok?

Hope to see more.