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the Stranger in the moonlig...
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseHmm... kind of a sad and desperate idea, with the way its written though actually it could be just fine depending on the person. Its just a shame that so many people don't believe they deserve better.

~the Stranger in the moonlight
fatbird33
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abusehe he nice. i liked that you bolded your main point
Jellyfish Or Something
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseI never thought if it that way. I guess there is a loophole in those two sayings and you're the first person I've ever heard say it. Beautiful!
anmegrl01
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abuseheh. nice. I like it, especially the end bit. well done, mate :D
simpleplan13
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abusethe ending is really great... nicely done
SEMMU
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abuseYou've just descibed, what I'd think, repels women from men. Yet, you're intrigued? Well, different strokes for different folks. Actually, I'm glad guys like that are out there. It makes dating way too easy.

I'm confused by the line, "And of his fourth pack smoked"
I understand what your saying, but the wording trips me up. Just a thought.

I enjoyed it.
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