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| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseHmm... kind of a sad and desperate idea, with the way its written though actually it could be just fine depending on the person. Its just a shame that so many people don't believe they deserve better. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| fatbird33 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abusehe he nice. i liked that you bolded your main point |
| Jellyfish Or Something 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseI never thought if it that way. I guess there is a loophole in those two sayings and you're the first person I've ever heard say it. Beautiful! |
| anmegrl01 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseheh. nice. I like it, especially the end bit. well done, mate :D |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abusethe ending is really great... nicely done |
| SEMMU 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseYou've just descibed, what I'd think, repels women from men. Yet, you're intrigued? Well, different strokes for different folks. Actually, I'm glad guys like that are out there. It makes dating way too easy. I'm confused by the line, "And of his fourth pack smoked" I understand what your saying, but the wording trips me up. Just a thought. I enjoyed it. |