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| mangosorbet 2008-04-27 ch 6,  | abuseFirst time I review, but I love your story a lot, I think it's very original and the characters are great :) |
| anonymous 2008-03-06 ch 4, anon. | abuseadding to the review on ch2, i like that even the "magical" characters, like claude, don't know everything. Characters who know everything get annoying. Keep going! |
| anonymous 2008-03-06 ch 2, anon. | abusethis is really good! It's original, it's suspenseful, it doesn't give too much away, but just enough. Just one question- didn't annie call her suzy before claude did? She seemed ok with Annie saying it, why not claude? Minor question, I know, but still. |
| Bingster 2008-02-16 ch 3, | abuseVery refreshing. I really like the dialogue too. It’s always nice when you stumble upon a well crafted and entertaining story. |
| rika195 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseYour story is interesting! It draws your reader into the story, even if they aren't actually interested in reading it. It catches my attention, and now I'm curious. well done. I guess I'll have to read more! Well written, and very intriguing. Nice job. |
| YellowCanary 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abuseVery intruiging story so far, I love it. I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings. |
| October Rose 2008-01-18 ch 2, | abuseI was about to ask you when you'd started your new story! I love the mix of fantasy, adventure and of course, that sprinkle of romance. And I'm ever so curious about that mysterious organisation that Claude belongs to. Update soon! |
| skittle-me-street 2008-01-12 ch 2, | abuseFirst review Baby!! Awesome. It seems even better than when I read it the first time, and gets better with every chapter! Ahh Claude. Sexiness. (Added to all favourites and alerts.) |