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| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-01-07 ch 1,  | abuseVery understandabsle, I know someone like that. very well done! Kristie Marie |
| melbell 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuse*claps* good job. =] |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseI really like the rhyming a lot... and the ending is great.. nice piece |
| Devil's Playground 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThe writing isn't overly fancy or anything, but the message is really powerful all the same. I don't know what advice I can offer, but I feel your pain, I can tell you that. :( I hope things get better... Best of luck. |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuse*Sigh* I don't know what to say. Telling you to talk to him would be stupid, telling you to forget him would also be stupid. I just don't know, dude. -stix- |
| maximusrexmundi 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseHi :) Nice poem as always. Hang in there, all pains go numb eventually. Some even stop hurting. Hope for you its the second, cuz theres too much of the first in the world already. |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. It expresses your feelings well. I hope things get better for you. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |