The friends are funny, will they be throughout the whole book? You have a decided knack for dramatic entrances.

Wow, leave it to a Wolfe to come up with such a plan. I can't wait to see what comes next! The accent is humourous, also.

Darn it, I forgot to put you on author review! Here I've been waiting anxiously and you already have six chapters posted! I'll just review extra, I guess.

already? she is already falling for him? that was quick. come on Aylin you have a little more spunk than that in you. give him the old one two kick him in the crotch. call him some names THEN sleep with him. then leave HIM for a few months then allow him the pleasure of being your husband.

aw they sound so cute. I hope his wife gives him pleanty of trouble before surrendering. It would be kind of cool if she actually had had a child and it was hidden somewhere or something. well loved this chapter chao.

What did she do to her? it sounds trecherous. I would hate Douglass for leaving me after all that even though he would have set me free in the mean time.

I rather like this new story. It is one of my favorites so far. I can't wait for the next few chapters. update soon. love your devoted reviewer.

Ok, I suck at reviewing...or remembering to review that is...so here I am making a conscious effort to tell you that I have read, and will continue to read and I love every minute of it. Reading new chapters from you is like the highlight of my day...okay that sounds a little weird and sad...but I get off work, change into comfy clothes, sit down with some cocoa and read the new chapters you post. It really is one of my favorite parts of the day.

So anyway, I'm liking the new story, the plot line is interesting. Major props for how you've managed to intertwine your different stories. Keep plugging away and even if I don't review I will keep faithfully reading! LOVE!

I'm really enjoying this story, I think it may even be my favourite about of the three so far. Just love Aylinn's character. More, More, More!

I love how you've set the story up. Really can't wait for the next chapters!

Great start, love all her friends. Can't wait to see how the story develops!

Time to try and make my review as short, simple, and concise as possible.

As you said in your authors note in chapter one, you hate to be cliche with your stories elements, and so far they haven't been. I feel this story has a bit more depth to it than you imagine it to have, which makes it all the more desirable to read.

The first two chapters are excellent, like a lot of your other works, and I hope you update quickly. The suspense is killing me. Heh.

Another great start! Love your character development and carry over in this series. Can't wait for the next chapters.

I've really enjoyed your two other books. This one looks to be be as good, if not better. Can't wait to read the rest!