"Burning me slow"?

Do you mean "burning me slowly"?

um the message in the poem isnt very clear ;]

other then that, pretty good. not your best. not that i know what your best is... but whatever.

hows your latest story going? byes =]

~srz

...but maybe the saying is right...maybe it is better to have loved and lost it then to have never loved at all...and maybe you need to here the song, "scars remain" by; Disciple. this just reminded me of that song. it's really good.

good work on this. keep writing.