I liked the whole Prince Charming/Cinderella shoe thing in there. I liked the whole story as a whole.

i think i should stop reading your one shots for now. i might have my hopes up with love.. XD
your stories are so *-* makes me feel mushy inside or something.. XD

Cute, not exactly original.
Typo: 'moment, they stood there, and it was a battle of wits'
I think you meant 'battle of wills'.
x reeka

ending wasn't too bad..but i like your longer stories more, this story felt like it ended before anything began. Yet again very sweet!!

that was hilarious i love cliche love stories and your little side comments were eally funny.

Flesh it out more... mainly the ending. They go from him saving her to making out? That's not the way it normally happens... i dont' think anyway... :)

oh my god i think this is every girl's fantasy. so adorable (man i wish i knew other descriptive words) and i loved it!

Aww! Absolutely adorable. :)

-grins- I really love your oneshots, for the most perfect reason: they're just so cute and fluffy and adorable and perfect.

Seriously. Love 'em.

-toffeecakesxox.

well, i for one, loved it. short and sweet. good job.

this was interesting. not all was expected, I think you should have it longer.

nice story, and the first person thing ...you are doing great :D

FANTASTIC STORY!
XX

cute story =]
loved it!

aww, cute :) *warm fuzzy feeling effectively spreading throughout being* nice job. Gotta love the best friends thing.