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| Laughing In the Night 2008-09-18 ch 5,  | abuseVery cute. I like it. The style needs some work, but overall, this is very good. Update? I like Rory best, by the way. |
| saxygirl-2009 2008-09-10 ch 2, | abuseomg, i love it! i was laughing in the middle of one of my classes and got in trouble, but it was well worth it! ~Katie |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-07-11 ch 5, | abuseFLIPPING GREAT!!..LOL...VERY FUNNY!...UPDATE ASAP!! |
| Dominican Lady 2008-07-10 ch 5, | abuselove the story keep going it's great. |
| Rynx-too-genki 2008-03-27 ch 4, | abuseGreat story! But isn't the constellation called the 'little dipper? Also I think she gave away her parents deaths a little to soon and easily. Usually a person wouldn't slip up like that. Not unless they had an emotional moment and she ended up blurting it. I mean... The moment was frghtening for her but because it wasn't really elaborate it seemed a little out of place from my view. Great story! I look forward to reading more! (Thanks for reviewing my poem 10 faces!) |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-03-24 ch 4, | abuseawesome! UPDATE SOON! |
| lilazndork 2008-03-23 ch 4, | abuseom my gosh! cool story going on!! u have to update soon!! seriously! |
| J. M. Dusk 2008-03-23 ch 4, | abusei loviedovie it! i dont know where your sense of humor comes from lol love the whole bit about the barbie/magic school bus books keep updating love! xo ~jay em~ |
| happy ever afterxx 2008-03-23 ch 4, | abuseNew Reader: I actually love this story, please update again soon |
| JJ March 2008-03-20 ch 3, | abusethese stories just make me smile! |
| T. VonKit 2008-01-22 ch 3, | abuseBasically... i'm lovin the hotties!! lol and i'm debating between whether i wanna choose adell or rory.. decisions decisions!! welp, gotta read your other ones.. so cya sista!! lol x's && o's!! |
| hypengyophobia 2008-01-19 ch 3, | abuseLance sounds so hawt! =] Ver-Bear is a cute name as well =) Update soon |
| Lady of Confusion 2008-01-16 ch 2, | abuseLOVE IT! UPDATE SON! |
| Sun Goddess 13 2008-01-14 ch 2, | abuseI love the start of this story. I can't wait to read what happens next. I love that Vera seems to be strong enough to handle the four boys. Hopefully she will be able to win Blaine over soon. Good start! |
| Inkhearts and Inkstains 2008-01-14 ch 2, | abuseI can't wait for more. Thanks for the pm. |