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| TwilightWolf666 2008-01-31 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, thats pretty ** insane. I see what you mean tho and to quote this masterpiece...it sucks, ggreat job -TwilightWolf |
| felicia13 2008-01-05 ch 1,  | abuseIt's so true. There's something about the way you write... it's very nice. Blunt, but nice. I always love the way you format poetry. It's risque and pretty much breaks every rule on line length, but that's why I like it. Good work on that. That being said, I don't like this so much because... it's sort of told and almost ranted and... there aren't really a lot of images. But it does have a certain charm. It's all you, babe. Love, Felicia. |