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| MidnightMoon73 2008-05-30 ch 1,  | abuseAgain, simple yet powerful. This is completely true with the whole social standings and what they do to people. The last two lines were just extremely powerful. Amazing job! |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written! I love the line "Why friendships are based so much on social standing" What a good question to ask! And it fits perfectly into this poem! Very well done! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseSweet, good choice of words that lead onto awesome rhymes, well writen, great job, keep writing. ~Lurid~ |