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| Detox 2008-02-07 ch 1,  | abuseThis was actually damn entertaining for a oneshot. Nice characterization of Pritchard, he kind of reminded me of a cartoon character (not sure which one though). Great dialogue used on his part. I like how everything is short and to the point, it leaves the reader enough room to fill in the details themselves which makes it more enjoyable. Hah it kind of sucks that you won't continue this, I hear you about that teen drama crap... there's way too many cliche things out there that everyone seems to love. But anyway, nice job on this. |
| cherry144 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! I had my doubts when i first saw it on your profile, but it turned out to be witty, dramatic, and very clever. I didn't really understand the actual death at first, but now that I read it over it makes more sense. Such a funny story...all I can say is yay! |