heartbreking. ur very good at wat u do.
best of the whole lot

It's good, spells something, AND rhymes. Nice. =o

Fantastic job expressing yourself. Nice work.

Thanks for your review of "Places I Thought I Would Never Go". I really appreciate it.

Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~

wow this is really good...ur peoms are amazing..keep it up!

This is the first time i've seen this. I loved the poem and the messege in bold. Great work. Adding to favs!

Kristie Marie

creative, well thought-out.
the general idea is pretty simple, but the structure is what really makes this stand out.
bravo.

I LOVE YOUR EXPRESSIONS IN THIS POEM... GREAT READ!!

There is nothing I love more than poems with hidden (or not so hidden) alternate meanings, and this one even rhymes! Except one thing:

E asy if you see it in a new light.

kinda threw that part off for me, it's longer than any other line (save for the last one) and it just...interrupts the flow. That's the only tiny thing, but overall this is another outstanding piece.

Absoultly fantastic! not only is it a well written poem, but i love how the first letter of each line spells " I don't want to see you go"
So brilliant!

♥ Dreaming Chica ♥

this cool.very cool. must say i have heard about poems like these but this is the first i have seen it written

Wow! This is so beautifully written, and clever, you've obviously got a lot of talent, and your expression is great :)

Excellent use of form. With emotionally specific thoughts. I like how you've manuevered the sound in places to create some progression twists. Great form work.

i cried. Its beautiful.

I love how you spell it out... the piece is beautiful and well done

WOW! once again, amazing. good job.