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| PoisonTouch 2008-05-10 ch 7,  | abuseI love the scheme |
| PoisonTouch 2008-05-10 ch 8, | abuseI love everything you write!! keep at it your biggest reader! |
| PoisonTouch 2008-05-10 ch 6, | abusenice |
| PoisonTouch 2008-05-10 ch 5, | abusemy fav in this collection |
| PoisonTouch 2008-05-10 ch 4, | abuseconfusing but familair |
| PoisonTouch 2008-05-10 ch 3, | abuseI love it |
| PoisonTouch 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuse"fall around me now" so powerfull |
| PoisonTouch 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abusesad reminds me of a porcelain doll |
| The Cowardly Lion 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abusevery angst very cute dark, creepy, would be labelled "emo" I LOVE IT Bee going on Nathan... |
| Emo-tional Princess 2008-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseyeah i know i'm sorry too. i don't really know what to say cos so much has happened to me these past few months, and i've felt like blocking every one out but really wish i could talk about it. you know you really did mean a lot to me and i was really upset when jessica king stopped you from being my friend and i'm sorry for all the stuff that happened cos of it i never wanted any of it to happen. i've been really really hurt over the past month and i know i have good friends to turn to but they don't seem to help or understand. i don't know what to do and i really feel lost right now. |
| Somewhere In Between 2008-02-10 ch 8, | abusethe similies in this.. amazing. the whole thing.. amazing. you.. amazing. that get my point across? xP |
| Somewhere In Between 2008-02-10 ch 7, | abuseI don't even know what to say about this one.. its like.. 'dancing' and 'glitter' smashed together into one big amazing.. blob? xD love it |
| Somewhere In Between 2008-02-10 ch 6, | abusefor some reason 'sandpaper' comes to mind with this one.. if that makes sense xP I dunno.. it just rough.. but at the same time it's peeling off the layers of someone.. so yeah.. 'sandpaper' its awesome |
| Somewhere In Between 2008-02-10 ch 5, | abusei love how you didnt use any punctuation in this.. its very unlike you but it did the poem justice |
| Somewhere In Between 2008-02-10 ch 4, | abusefirst.. I love the "you anit-climax and find yourself back where you started" line. that is such a unique and.. breathtaking use of 'anti-climax'.. never would have thought of that myself and the lines after it give the whole thing even more power |