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| S.M. Crosse 2008-02-18 ch 1,  | abuseI liked this one - but the switching from first to second person from 'me' and 'my' to 'you' and 'your' was a little jolting, and took me out of the emotion of the poem. Nice job, though! |
| Kusje 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuse'Hope is your wings/bear me to freedom' -- Amazing. Great job. |
| Lurid Black 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseSweet, nicely writen, good choice of words, i like this poem, keep writing ~Lurid~ |