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| quixotickvinne 2008-06-30 ch 13,  | abuseOh yay :) This chapter and the two before it made me smile :) Is this the end, or is there going to be more? |
| Charity F 2008-06-19 ch 13, | abuseI liked this chapter. But no!! Why is he leaving? |
| Charity F 2008-06-19 ch 12, | abuse>>“It’s not that simple.” The moment Justin said that, there was a crack of thunder in the distance. |
| Charity F 2008-06-19 ch 11, | abuse“How could you be so blind...?” So true. ^^ |
| Charity F 2008-06-19 ch 10, | abuseOk, so after this chapter, you’ve started me beginning to un-hate Sarah. I really liked the changing POV in this chapter. That added to the... mystique. |
| Charity F 2008-06-19 ch 9, | abuseOmg! Justin is so hott… ^^ |
| XO-Escape-With-The-Music-XO 2008-06-17 ch 13, | abuse:) I hope everything works out between her and Jane |
| Prestige 2008-06-16 ch 13, | abuseOh wow. I was going to go to the next chapter, but there isn't one for me to go to. I was a little shocked by that fact. Anyway, Jeanne and Justin are finally together! YAY!! You're doing an amazing job with the descriptions and your writing seems to have gotten better since I last read. Fabulous job, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter! |
| Essevera 2008-06-14 ch 13, | abusenice update :) |
| supersaiyanx 2008-06-14 ch 13, | abuseA lovely update! Hope another one comes soon. |
| xoxhp 2008-06-14 ch 13, anon. | abuseaw it's about time the both of them know the truth =) update soon. |
| jlr 2008-06-14 ch 13, | abuseThis story made me really happy, reading it. I just had a question about the intro, with being engaged from birth. Was that intentionally misleading? ~jlr |
| N.M.E 2008-06-14 ch 13, | abuseAw...this chapter was so cute! The best. Justin is so sweet. And 'farmgirl' is even more cute! Amazing! update soon. |
| K.P. Crest 2008-06-14 ch 13, | abuseAW! I hope it ends on a good note, and that justin does get to stay...but really, everything is going so well now that i'm actually scared something will go wrong in the next chapter or so...yeah, paranoid!! but anyways, write more please! |
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You. 2008-06-14 ch 13, | abuselove the story! cant wait for more! --ifly*hugs* |