This is probably the last thing I'll get the chance to review tonight, which I believe, takes care of the songs. Hopefully next week I can take care of the stories.

Anyway, I think I have two favourite parts of the song:
1. "Is it that hard, to believe in me! Regrets as far, as I can see... My delusions are, my reality! And you are my, calamity..."
2. "Please take my hand, I'm done with this now! Can't we still be standing when they all fall down?"

Both segments just sort of stuck out at me, you know?

On a constructive note, I do believe your grammar is improving. I haven't seen any mistakes in the last few songs, so that's good. Another great job.