Haha, did you know I was in marching band? I always wanted to twirl my clarinet around like a baton, but it was too expensive to be treated that cavalierly, unfortunately. :(

Don't really get what the title has to do with the story, but you have good grammar anyway! Hope your next story has something slightly resembling a plot. :P

-)Mer(-

Um... it's very strange, your clasmates must have been scared. But it was enjoyable.
~ Flamingflie

(*cracks up laughing*) Randomness rules! :D Oh man that made me laugh so hard. When did you write this again, school? Well, I like Kachina, she's funny and random and funny some more. You're sure this is the end?

Wow, that was weird. Very random and just absolutely insane. I love the part where some kind of horn sprouts from her head. Are you really not going to make anymore?

ch 1 - this school... were there any strange-looking objects in the lunches?

seriously I agree with that other reveiw how old are you? Your grammer is pretty good though!!

What the heck? Anyway. How old were you when you wrote this?