Great job describing feelings. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~

i know what you mean here. there was a lot of raw emotion in this. when you said 'teared' i think you meant 'tore' but other than that it was pretty good. keep writing. = )

Is the "Because You have" supposed to have a capitalized "y"? Just curious. Anyways, the poem is pretty good, I suppose. It didn't feel particularly original, but somewhat heartfelt, at least. Definitely powerful. I'm not exactly in love, and don't think it's amazing, but it's a nice, sort of sad poem. Not depressing, but interesting. The flow is very good - even and smooth. I like the use of words in this. Nice job.

it is really good. it is intesting and judging from this poem you dont care what my opinion is on it and tht is a good thing cause u shouldnt. but it is good anyways