That. Was. Unexpected.

Intense and somehow amusing...in an incredibly sinister way. I enjoyed it. Your characters are real: flesh rather than text.

You turned an average story about a bunch of high school screw ups into a work of art. That's talent.

Maddie. xx

Well, that was a truly a noteworthy story. Your characters are very real. Seem a lot like some guys I've met around my town. It was fun to follow too, wondering what was going to happen, and where exactly it was all leading. Did not expect the ending, and I gotta say, it just made me crack up in computer's class. Good way to throw humor in a generally depressing story. Black humor too. The best kind. Effin' right, man. Good stuff.

Whoa! Great story, and the end... i was like, fuck! didn't see that one coming!

OH my god, this story blew me away! I can't even describe to you how much I love it! The dialogue was beautiful, I haven't seen anyone write in such great dialogue, and the ending threw me for a loop. I like how nonchalant he said it. But if he hadn't knocked up Lisa, then Jimmy wouldn't have killed himself. He doesn't even feel guilty for it. Jeeze, this story was intense.

WTF. I thought it was going to be boring after a while there, but that ending was gold. Too good for a site like this. Well done Chain.

when i first started this i was a little apprehensive...but in the end i really liked it. the twist was excellent

Really good story. Loved the twist in the end. I didn't see it coming at all. =D

Oh wow. I'll admit the last line took awhile to digest, but when it did I was like, "OH." Yeah. I'm still having after-effects of the "OH."
Oh.
I honestly don't know what to say, other than it was an enjoyable read and the cursing was a tad on the excessive side. But whatever.
You're cool. xD