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| ukranianmira 2008-08-31 ch 9,  | abuseaw she has to end up with janson plz |
| ElegantDisaster89 2008-08-30 ch 9, | abuseAH! YOU CAN'T END A CHAPTER LIKE THAT! I'm gonna cry, I wanna know what's going on :( although, still I love that you wrote another chapter for me to gawk at ;) I LOVE THIS STORY! |
| LizzieBlack 2008-08-30 ch 9, | abuseThat's so annoying. I need more!! I really want to know what's going to happen. I like reading the cliched stories. I like your writing so keep it up and post another chapter soon :) -lb |
| Jayjack 2008-08-12 ch 8, | abusewhat song is that? E. she finally told him. update soon. |
| ElegantDisaster89 2008-08-12 ch 8, | abuseYes, that chapter was awsome! I love that you brought back that song, it was amazing in the first story and the fact that you brought it back, SO happy! I am wondering how he could possibly reply to something like that...one second all he wants to do is sit next to her (be with her perhaps?) and then she pulls out the pictures and BAM life goes topsy turvy! Can't wait for the next chapter, but take your time, this story is SO worth the wait! *HUGS!* |
| Maiia A. 2008-08-12 ch 8, | abusethat chapter was so short! ah i want more! loved it by the way... i want to see progress with Riley & jason... and see some of kyle...to see how riley & kyle are together...& maybe put jason in there too to see how he reacts to kyle with riley...muhahahaha...lol... please update soon :-) |
| tanya2byour21 2008-08-11 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter and I loved the song. I so can't wait for Jason's reaction to what Riley just told him. Keep up the great writing and please post more when you can. Tanya |
| ukranianmira 2008-08-11 ch 8, | abusei love itt |
| ukranianmira 2008-07-31 ch 7, | abusei read all three parts and i want more |
| midnightbeauty 2008-07-30 ch 7, | abuseAww poor Jason and poor Riley :( Monique is lying cheating scum >.< biznatch. But now Jason can break up with her :D Please update soon!! I would write more, but I'm going to a carnival :) Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| tanya2byour21 2008-07-29 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapter and I can't wait for Jaon's reaction when they tell him. I just hope he does not take it out on Reily. Keep up the great writing and please post more when you can. Tanya |
| ElegantDisaster89 2008-07-29 ch 7, | abuseI literally SQUEALED when I saw that you had updated! YAY! I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon! |
| ElegantDisaster89 2008-06-27 ch 6, | abuseWTF!? DAMMIT! I WANT MORE DAMMIT! lol...ok..now I love you and your stories but DAMN you've gotta update more regularily! lol. PWEASE update soon! |
| midnightbeauty 2008-06-24 ch 6, | abuseOmg. Agh. Madness. Grr. Okay, can't write much, my hand and arm hurts from playing laser-shock tag, but RAWR! **so angry** stupid relationships. **sigh** Well, update soon! Please! Kisses, midnightbeauty |
| Amora Lee 2008-06-18 ch 5, | abuseGreat start to the story, love the sequels aswell. Keep Writing! |