i'm speechless. this is soo beautiful and so true. great work.


I would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!

AWESOME! I love it! I just think they're should be uppercase in it,

oh, lovely.

Oh, wow, that is perfect. I hope to see something from you soon. Keep writing! :)

I liked it however; it appealed to me as "ironic", and reading such things is almost my forte.

Nice work.

It sound like a reply to something that was said to you, but that makes it a bit confusing since we don't know what they said. However I can make a guess.
"Bent at the wind's mercy"...
Interesting.

that's gorgeous. and so meaningful! amazing.

I really love this. It's very true to life, in a lot of ways. Great work. :D

wow, it's awesome! so few words, but it says so much.

Hi,
Love this, it reads very well rythmically and like people have said before you have a real skill for fitting a wealth of opinions and idealisms into just a few words!

You have a lot of amazing poems!!
Keep writing!

I don't think you should delete this - you've managed to convey such an idea in so few words, and the metaphor is just brilliant.

konban wa

I wasn't going to log in, but I had to in order to add it to my favorite story list. :) Brilliant work. Sheer genius.

Sorry for the crappy review - exhausted beyond my own comprehension right now...

Gute nacht
-Shan-

*adds to favs*

Please don't delete this. It's genuis. Really.

Peace & Love

~> h.p. warble

interesting... I like it a lot...the indirect comapirson of humans to trees was great

Sweet, you fit so much into just 19 words.
Keep writing