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| Kirby Tails 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseBoth of them could have been saved if not for this deadly lie; chilling. |
| SilentSongs 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad! I like how it is simple and easy to read, yet powerful. Good story. ~SilentSongs~ |
| Evil Angel of DOOM 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseAww so sad... |
| Sanou Izumi 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseQuite sad this one-shot. But overall I loved the summary and the the content itself. Great job! -Izumi |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseIt is so sad. Great story though. Nice title. Lovely work. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a brilliant day. ~Twilight Starr~ |