That. Was. AWESOME MAN!

Awesome story, the woman must've been in extreme pain! You wrote this peice very well, and the disturbing detail made it even better. Great job!

This was sick and wonderfully twisted. A little short for my liking, but great job. The title is KICKING! Don't EVER stop writing.

It's so gruesome... I LOVE it. Really descriptive and beautifully written. Wonderful work.

It was so beautifully written. It was haunting. Lovely work. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a terrific day.

~Twilight Starr~