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| perpetual questions 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abusethunder-soaked skies... another favourite line. i love the way you wrote death; it just makes the word take a dead fall down the page. wonderful work, of course. -adrian |
| the face in the window 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful! Lovely word choice and imagery. Nice job! Rowan. |
| Zeurpiet 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, vivid. And extremely sad, I can't even imagine how painful this would be. Beautifully written. |
| windy girl 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseI think this is one of those poems that calls for undivided attention. I had my music playing while reading this, and it just didn't work out. So I turned off my music and it all got a lot clearer. I just love the second & third stanzas. The whole poem seems wet, and I like it. -max |