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perpetual questions
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abusethunder-soaked skies... another favourite line. i love the way you wrote death; it just makes the word take a dead fall down the page. wonderful work, of course.

-adrian
the face in the window
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautiful! Lovely word choice and imagery. Nice job!

Rowan.
Zeurpiet
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseOh wow, vivid. And extremely sad, I can't even imagine how painful this would be. Beautifully written.
windy girl
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseI think this is one of those poems that calls for undivided attention. I had my music playing while reading this, and it just didn't work out. So I turned off my music and it all got a lot clearer. I just love the second & third stanzas. The whole poem seems wet, and I like it.

-max
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