this is really god... :-D but... who's child is it's?

wow, ash, i love this one. i love how its written and wat its about.

xx

awesome ! love how u structured this :)

subtle yet meaningful

i'm going through all ur stories hehe.

Wow. so emotional, so perfect! Qmazing, amazing. Good job

I like this. It's unique. I especially like how every bit starts off with "She stole." I'm sure the way I interpret it is different from how you or others see it, but still... Very nicely done.

PS: Fall Out Boy rocks my life!

wait so she had his baby right?

but i dont get the furniture part...

do you mean she took over his place? sry im confuzzled

BUT

it was realy good :]

me love

your loyal reader,

justdance

Awesome, origional, really well written, yesh, good to see a Melbornian on, might have to add you when I review more I like.

Keep writing!

Oh, who's baby is it?

I'm kinda dense like that.

Either way, love the repitition of the lines and I loved the fact you could spell unlike myself. The repitition really helped bring the reader to wonder what was going to happen next.

Que bello!1Its beutiful

Beautiful as always

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An nice and sweet short piece. Simple but dramatic.

Absolutely beautiful...i loved it ]

like it

i know it's supposed to be short

but could be a bit lees generic and a bit more descriptive

i feel like the end got cut off

like there should be more

but maybe that's just me

i can say i will be reading more of your works

intriguing, your story was.

congratualtions.

short and sweet. :)