Reviews for wax fruits and suicide notes

Faith Adeline 2008-01-13 ch 6,	abuseI like the closeness in this, like it's a journal and you're just pouring your heart into the words you write. Very good. Gad, I'm assuming is God, that just threw me off. Other than that little thing, I loved it. I think you could've made it flow a little better, but I also think that when you're in love you're not really thinking so clearly, so things can be choppy. I dont know, hope that makes sense. Keep it up and update soon. Faith
Faith Adeline 2008-01-08 ch 5,	abusehappy 11th month anniversary! haha. Great job, again (like with gawd) the babez isn't really mature so I would consider making it just baby. But that's just me. Update soon :) Faith
Faith Adeline 2008-01-08 ch 4,	abuseGood, but I wouldn't have Gawd, I'd change it to God. It just loses maturity by using that. Update soon. Faith
Faith Adeline 2008-01-06 ch 3,	abuseVery very good. I think the message in this is really good. I really enjoyed it and cannot wait for more so update soon! Faith
Faith Adeline 2008-01-05 ch 2,	abuseI like this. I like that it's kind of bubbly and happy, just don't lose that special maturity in your writing that you have. Keep up the wonderful work. Faith And I'm glad you're in love (on your way to). It's a wonderful feeling. :)