Hey!

This is an interesting first chapter you have here. To be honest what attracted me to this particular story is the title "Tristan" happens to be the name of a friend of mine, and that name is not so common as I've found so it got me.

The only mistake that I could see was a grammar one, but I'm not really so sure it's a mistake at all. So if I'm wrong just ignore me.^^

"Maybe if I compare you to them than they’ll start acting like you more?"

I don't think there is suppose to be a question mark at the end of the sentence. Because her mother isn't actually asking a question.

The plot you have is interesting, and unique as well. Not a type that I come across often. Well I hope they find Adelaide soon.

Great Job! I look forward to your next chapter.^^

Kaiyako K.

P.S. Sorry this review is so long, I'm rambling a bit. Hehe...^^

very unique and intresting..hmm..i've been meaning to see stardust ugh i just dont know when im gonna go frickin rent it
anyways LOL
enough of my rambling this was really good I really liked it
please continue!!
and i agree adelaide is a awesomely cool name.