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| katherine haynes 2008-01-09 ch 5, anon. | abuse'i was hardly disturbed'...my butt! a very short chapter and the concept of the dream kind of threw me off but that is okay, some dreams are supposed to do that. |
| shimi c carroll 2008-01-09 ch 1,  | abuseamazing story, please continue! |
| Indigo-Ocean 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseWow! I love this story. It's really gripping and action packed. You have to finish it! |
| katherine haynes 2008-01-07 ch 4, anon. | abuseatleast here is one more review! there was a few spelling mistakes, but they weren't that noticeable. The story so far is really interesting. thoguh the last chapter was a bit weird but i am sure with more chapters, things will make more sense! |
| Aar Delarian 2008-01-06 ch 3, | abusethis has to be one of the best stories ive read, certainly the best in terms of being increadibly interesting in the first couple chapters. please continue, i would really like to see where this goes |