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| cherryblossom353 2008-05-03 ch 3,  | abuseplease update! I just finished reading "perhaps love" and went straight to read this one (well I finished last night at around midnight)please dont leave me hanging!! I know you havnt updated since January, but dont give up!! |
| aripie 2008-04-17 ch 3, | abuseI absolutely love your stories and for the life of me I thought you were a female writer for the LONGEST but then it dawned on me, no woman (including my obssessive game loving self) breathes games like you do LOL...but whatev - I actually caught it when you said at one point "OMG he updates" *lightbulb* Story alert activated and cannot wait to read more!! I love Adam >_> ~Ari |
| Lac3d w1th p01s0n 2008-03-22 ch 3, | abuseAwesome, of course. Miles makes me laugh... Gaah... sorry, fresh out of anything intelligent to say, but it's still an awesome story. I really can't wait to read more... Hmm... On a randomish note, I kinda wanna know what happened to Blake... Yeah anyway. l0v3, p01s0n |
| MisterScotty 2008-03-15 ch 3, | abuseupdate...? =] |
| Bjork-rules-the-world 2008-02-27 ch 3, | abuseHey, I love this story. I just finished reading the first story, and I've read it all day!! :D |
| SerialXLain 2008-02-25 ch 3, | abuseI really like the italicized parts of this story. :) I dunno why. One thing though, I noticed you switching between tenses sometimes. :O I do it a lot myself, but I always notice when other people do it too. lol Just thought I'd let you know. :) More hearts to Adam and to you too for writing this. :P xo |
| SerialXLain 2008-02-25 ch 2, | abuse"There was leopard print, there were feathers, and there was tight pink stuff." Lol at that, man. I think I like Miles. :) I also like Adam a lot. I'm glad you're writing this. :) xo |
| SerialXLain 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseAww... Adam was so cute and shy and sweet there at the end. I liked that italicized section... Nice. xo |
| Casey.Duh 2008-02-18 ch 3, | abuseI like Adam. He is all... duck-like. I don't know how to put it. Love it though. |
| P1nkBerry please 2008-02-17 ch 3, | abuseUPDATE PLEASE! |
| Kraheera-Raven 2008-02-13 ch 3, | abuse*sniffle* GAWD. *cries* I want Adam and Blake to get back together. |
| Sw33tR0ze 2008-02-12 ch 3, | abuseUPDATE! NOW! Please! |
| Sw33tR0ze 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseKeep the updates coming please! |
| Green Eyed Panda 2008-02-05 ch 3, | abuseWow... you never cease to amaze me with your storytelling abilities. This chapter actually really turned me on. "working impatiently at my shirt buttons, till all of them are unbuttoned and he pulls the shirt off my shoulders, exposing my skin in the moonlight" very visual descriptions and utterly sexy. |
| Green Eyed Panda 2008-02-05 ch 2, | abuseI've read all three chapters so far and this is by far the best... descriptions a cheeky and well placed... "I'm suddenly hugged by something multicolour" CLASSIC! |