   Lynn-Night 2008-11-03 . chapter 15Good job!
Update soon!
Love it so far!! |
 =) 2008-11-03 . chapter 1 'the art of losing is hard to master' |
 Estelin 2008-07-03 . chapter 14this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait for more |
 Ramona122003 2008-07-02 . chapter 1Sad beginning, but good nonetheless. The talking scenes are kind of dull so you may want to living them up a little.
Good overall, keep up it up:) |
 Silly-girl15 2008-06-19 . chapter 14good chap |
| Lynn-Night 2008-06-18 . chapter 14 Good job! Update as soon as possible! Love it! |
 Maxegirl1313 2008-05-18 . chapter 13Aw... Kalli and Zak are adorable together! Do you need an editor? I'm a grammar-freak, so if you need one just ask! Update soon! |
| Lynn-Night 2008-05-18 . chapter 13 Good job! Love it so far! Update please! |
| Silly-girl15 2008-05-18 . chapter 13 good chap |
 Kagome Yuki Niwa 2008-03-13 . chapter 12I loved the chapter! I also love the story! You are a very good writer and have wonderful talent! I can't wait until your next update! |
| Lynn-Night 2008-03-11 . chapter 12 Good job! I really like it! Update soon! Oh, and have fun wherever you're going! :P |
| Silly-girl15 2008-03-11 . chapter 12 good chap! yeah! |
| Lynn-Night 2008-03-05 . chapter 11 Aw poor Zak. :( Well I hope you can update sooner than a week. Haha! Love it! |
 Carlotta Lynn 2008-03-04 . chapter 11Poor Zak! I can't wait for more! Thanks for updating! |
| Silly-girl15 2008-03-04 . chapter 11 Good storie/chap! cant wait 4 the update! |
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