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| Estelin 2008-07-03 ch 14,  | abusethis was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait for more |
| Ramona122003 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseSad beginning, but good nonetheless. The talking scenes are kind of dull so you may want to living them up a little. Good overall, keep up it up:) |
| Silly-girl15 2008-06-19 ch 14, | abusegood chap |
| Lynn-Night 2008-06-18 ch 14, | abuseGood job! Update as soon as possible! Love it! |
| Maxegirl1313 2008-05-18 ch 13, | abuseAw... Kalli and Zak are adorable together! Do you need an editor? I'm a grammar-freak, so if you need one just ask! Update soon! |
| Lynn-Night 2008-05-18 ch 13, | abuseGood job! Love it so far! Update please! |
| Silly-girl15 2008-05-18 ch 13, | abusegood chap |
| Kagome Yuki Niwa 2008-03-13 ch 12, | abuseI loved the chapter! I also love the story! You are a very good writer and have wonderful talent! I can't wait until your next update! |
| Lynn-Night 2008-03-11 ch 12, | abuseGood job! I really like it! Update soon! Oh, and have fun wherever you're going! :P |
| Silly-girl15 2008-03-11 ch 12, | abusegood chap! yeah! |
| Lynn-Night 2008-03-05 ch 11, | abuseAw poor Zak. :( Well I hope you can update sooner than a week. Haha! Love it! |
| Dylan Marie 2008-03-04 ch 11, | abusePoor Zak! I can't wait for more! Thanks for updating! |
| Silly-girl15 2008-03-04 ch 11, | abuseGood storie/chap! cant wait 4 the update! |
| Lynn-Night 2008-02-27 ch 10, | abuseGood job! I really love it so far! Please update as soon as possible! |
| Somewhere InBetween Hi and ... 2008-02-22 ch 10, | abuseyeah, add to it! |