hahahaha... that was a great ending to the chapter. can't wait to read more. I'm really liking this story ; )

lol! bear! RUN FOR YOU LIVES!

hehehe

Hm New Boyfriend? Maybe? Lol she just needs someone whos down to earth. Zak is kinda funny. Update soon

Thats so sad that she had to leave her friends. Andrew is a pig how could he do that to her right after her parents dying. I was wondering if they caught the killer or if ur going to talk more about it. I hope you update soon. This is really good.

aw, that was so sweet! *sniffs* ...well except for the part with andrew, but he's just a gerk (i meant to spell it that way)

Yay! I didn't like Andrew anyway. I can't wait to see what Idaho holds.

Interesting. very interesting. I think this is going to be good, but of course right now it is just sad. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

aw i feel for her that sucks alot. losing both parents in one go? i can't imagine it

Eye catching and satisfying summary. I thought the beginning was a little too short but I'd like to see what happens next.

Seems like an interesting start. I was reading your summary and couldn't help but nod along. So right so right. Except about the Zak bit, we'll have to wait and see if that's true, I guess. I think what's keeping me 'on my toes' is the genre of this story. Romance, I can deal. The Humour bit is the one I thought was a little intriguing; so hit us with your best.

The writing was a little dull but I think that's because of the main character. I've always supported stories that somehow use their writing style, etc. to build up their character. I seriously don't think Kalli is 'defective' though. That's just too unnatural. I don't get how anyone can't show emotions, or won't, but maybe that's just me. Emotions are my world. xD Anyways, hope you can update to fill us in with more.

oh my gosh, thats so sad!