|Reviews for To Lose|
| Guest 1/11/08 . chapter 5
hahahaha... that was a great ending to the chapter. can't wait to read more. I'm really liking this story ; )
| Unsociably Acceptable 1/11/08 . chapter 5
lol! bear! RUN FOR YOU LIVES!
| Nicole Deming 1/11/08 . chapter 5
Hm New Boyfriend? Maybe? Lol she just needs someone whos down to earth. Zak is kinda funny. Update soon
| Nicole Deming 1/9/08 . chapter 4
Thats so sad that she had to leave her friends. Andrew is a pig how could he do that to her right after her parents dying. I was wondering if they caught the killer or if ur going to talk more about it. I hope you update soon. This is really good.
| Unsociably Acceptable 1/9/08 . chapter 4
aw, that was so sweet! *sniffs* ...well except for the part with andrew, but he's just a gerk (i meant to spell it that way)
| Carlotta Lynn 1/9/08 . chapter 4
Yay! I didn't like Andrew anyway. I can't wait to see what Idaho holds.
| Carlotta Lynn 1/6/08 . chapter 2
Interesting. very interesting. I think this is going to be good, but of course right now it is just sad. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
| Unsociably Acceptable 1/6/08 . chapter 2
aw i feel for her that sucks alot. losing both parents in one go? i can't imagine it
| ShadowFighterX 1/6/08 . chapter 1
Eye catching and satisfying summary. I thought the beginning was a little too short but I'd like to see what happens next.
| Lindy 1/6/08 . chapter 1
Seems like an interesting start. I was reading your summary and couldn't help but nod along. So right so right. Except about the Zak bit, we'll have to wait and see if that's true, I guess. I think what's keeping me 'on my toes' is the genre of this story. Romance, I can deal. The Humour bit is the one I thought was a little intriguing; so hit us with your best.
The writing was a little dull but I think that's because of the main character. I've always supported stories that somehow use their writing style, etc. to build up their character. I seriously don't think Kalli is 'defective' though. That's just too unnatural. I don't get how anyone can't show emotions, or won't, but maybe that's just me. Emotions are my world. xD Anyways, hope you can update to fill us in with more.
| Unsociably Acceptable 1/5/08 . chapter 1
oh my gosh, thats so sad!