i really like it.
like a LOT :D
i cant decide if He's going to be the good guy or the bad.
haha

Just a few of words to describe this awesome fic:
Beautifully thought and written ;]
The plot is interesting and fantastic, and the characters are marvelous.
Your description and writing skills are amazing.
Ha, I can keep on going, but I’ll just say that I’m anxious to read more of this brilliant story.
Keep it up! ~dR

Oh how I missed this story. It's really quite good, if you ask me. I love the premise, with the whole elves taking over the world and surpressing the humans. And the emotions are raw and real. I like it. Will there be another update soonish?

I really like how you incorporated religion in here. It's very realistic- if such a hostile takeover ever occurred, there would be plenty of humans in underground religious organizations.

Update soon!

~~Mazzie~~

i love the idea of this it has a real historical issue in here and the honesty of the character is brilliant carry on writing because it is amazing

Killer last sentence. This is truly awesome, and I'm really saddened that you don't have more reviews. I'm picky about writing, and tend to skip over paragraphs when bored, but you always keep me reading every last word. Brilliant. I can't wait for the romance to roll in. Update soon!

You've made a pretty dang good story here. The writing's good, it flows well, the main character is believable, and the plot is interesting. I haven't read many stories I can honestly say that about. Well done. ^^

I'm here. All ready too re-read all this new version ! But knowing all at already know will Mary my viewing different and I'm eager... (I don't know if I'm going to be able to forget Cirion this time ^^)

For some reason I don't remember the Elf box, is it new? JW. Great chapter. Update soon!

Wow, another brilliant chapter, and definitely not as long-awaited as the last one X3
Really good so far, keep it up!

~Hedwigs-pet-dalek

Okay, I remember using nicknames for all the characters, like Kat (or was it Rina?) and something for Cirion, right? Or maybe I'm thinking of something else. Anyways, great chapter. Are you continuing the sequel? JW. Well, update soon!

Finally-the much anticipated rewrite! I can't wait for the whole thing. This is brilliant and your writing style is superb. I usually just scan paragraphs on this site, but I read every word in your story. Love it! Please update soon!

Cliffhanger! 8O

A very good first two chapters. A good writing style, and a very interesting idea. There are way too many stories where elves are perfect beings.

I look forward to and update

~Hedwigs-pet-dalek

Are you going to update this soon? It's really interesting...And what a cliffie...:D
Ashe