I love this.

the images.

The emotions.

Everything.

Wow.

aw, that's so sweet and heartfelt. i love that your poems seem so honest, and real.

Gorgeous, really gorgeous. I love the imagery & the metaphors, particularly the mud one.

often I feel like poetry meanders too much, but luckily this piece is a wonderful cure for it, because I love the way it sticks clearly to a theme but isn't redundant. great writing.

First of all, love the author's note. I know this is probably a difficult situation, but still. Brilliant. The fourth stanza of this is perfection. I don't have enough words to say how much I enjoyed that. Bittersweet, angsty, lovely. Keep writing! :)

i like the second stanza the most, i would say. it is beautiful and yet very interesting.

overall this seems very rough, in a texture sort of way.

as if love was a tree with harsh, weathered bark.

does that even make sense?

this is amazing.

i love all the metaphors in it.

yours until the wind changes,

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