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| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-17 ch 1,  | abuseaw, that's so sweet and heartfelt. i love that your poems seem so honest, and real. |
| multiples of six 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous, really gorgeous. I love the imagery & the metaphors, particularly the mud one. |
| summerbee 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseoften I feel like poetry meanders too much, but luckily this piece is a wonderful cure for it, because I love the way it sticks clearly to a theme but isn't redundant. great writing. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, love the author's note. I know this is probably a difficult situation, but still. Brilliant. The fourth stanza of this is perfection. I don't have enough words to say how much I enjoyed that. Bittersweet, angsty, lovely. Keep writing! :) |
| Aquafied 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abusei like the second stanza the most, i would say. it is beautiful and yet very interesting. overall this seems very rough, in a texture sort of way. as if love was a tree with harsh, weathered bark. does that even make sense? |
| losing gracie girl 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abusethis is amazing. i love all the metaphors in it. yours until the wind changes, Lost |