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shesabeautyx
2008-07-16
ch 13,
abuseDude, I absolutely adore your stories. I can't even tell you.

I love how you don't drag them out and they're straight to the point without a bunch of unneccessary filler chapters - but well I love my fair share of those stories too, so I can't exactly discriminate.

But I really enjoyed reading this one. Marcus cracked me up, and them kidnapping her was hilarious.

I do think there could've been more build-up, and it wasn't clear exactly WHY Jordan liked Peyton so much, or why she was different really, but other than that it was a great story.

Good job :)
andee lee
2008-07-14
ch 13,
abuseI think that was one of the best stories I have read on FictionPress. Honestly. It was short and sweet but never lacking important details... It was cute but not too sugary ... the characters were developed right from the beginning and it was funny, too! i mean... DAMN!

anyways, just wanted to say congrats on a wonderful story. :) you're very talented!
Cecilyatheart
2008-07-10
ch 13,
abuseVery very cute story. Well done. I'd love a Jordan Cross.
RayaSlayer
2008-07-07
ch 13,
abuseaw...that was so adorable!
I love your idea for the story!
Thank you so much for posting this up :D
Amorelle
2008-06-11
ch 13,
abuseso...cute...*dies from the cuteness*
absolutely loved it ^0^
*squishes you*
vocecara
2008-06-07
ch 13,
abuse:) Quite different; I've never actually read any stories involving crypto before so it was an interesting read. I thought her trusting him came a bit..early though.

Great job:D
(I actually went to google codes haha)
Hecate's Diamon
2008-06-02
ch 13,
abuseAw! Such a good story! Short, but so sweet. Really well done too! Most people wouldn't chance this kind of relationship cause they would screw it up, but you did amazingly! Favourite!
promised rain
2008-05-14
ch 13,
abuseI loved the story, it was so sweet and cute!
Can't wait for the updates of your other stories!
cbprice25
2008-05-14
ch 13,
abuseI love it! That was fantastic! I'm even surprised that the chapters got so short near the end; the story probably had legs to go on a little bit longer.

Great characterization. You made the scenes so alive that I've been squirming in my seat with excitement.
britty-tt
2008-05-03
ch 13,
abuseHaha yeh it was sappy, but it was also really cute and sweet! Which is the best way I can describe this story.
It didn't have the complicativeness of most of the other stories. It was simple, short and sweet. Its a nice change.
A simple love story with little drama is good to read once and while.
Great job on this
xx
SimplySweetnSour
2008-04-22
ch 13,
abusetotally sappy but that's okay. what's the difference between a suit and a tux?
stillgold
2008-04-21
ch 13,
abuseOh, wow! I'm a little amazed that Jordan was capable of all this sappyness, but hey.

It was extraordinarily cute (sometimes puke-inducing, but only because I'm single, dammit, and resentful!) and very nice.

As always, your writing is excellent. Maybe the ending was a bit too perfect, but still. Very nice. :)
norma
2008-04-21
ch 13, anon.
abusesappy was just was the doctor ordered! wow.i'm so glad to see the epilogue. and the reunion was a great idea.

what i wanna know is when you're going ot update your other story.. forgot the name.. the magical redo one. i've been checkin that for a while now. please don't forget about it. and if you do ujust post your older version up again so we can see waht happened!
Gentle. Edge.
2008-04-20
ch 13,
abuseAw that was cute. But you're right, it was a bit sappy lol. Nice job tho :)
Gentle. Edge.
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseI'm kinda confused at how old they are and what grade they're in and stuff. I thought they were in high school then college then freshman year in college then senior year in college and now I'm just lost. But besides that, your story is pretty funny and I really like how it's going so far so I can't wait to read on! :)
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