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| Zalmaki 2008-05-22 ch 1,  | abuseNice form. It's tricky to get a pantoum to come full circle in so few stanzas; you pulled it off. I'm impressed. I've never seen the lines modified like that, though. It's effective, and I rather like it, but is it standard? |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseAww, I adore this! I like especially how you used a 'style' in your poem here. =) A fun one at that, too! I like the 'Scottish-ness' (hehe) here, too. If you get what I mean. =O Basically, how you used words like 'wee' and 'bonny' and 'a-sailin''. I thought it was really cute and added some more depth to the poem. (: And you're right, it does seem like a fun style to write in! It was definitely fun to read. |